My worst day ever

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First Draft

My Worst day ever

It was a sunny day in the African Savannah. And i'm very Excited! in my new place my papa and my mama is the biggest buffalo ever and  me I’m just a calf But one day i’m  gonna be a big buffalo ever  And. we like to go in the river bank because the river bank  is nice  and cold and  this second my dad shouted run and I feel really, scared because I can see and smell the lion behind me and Then they got me and I thought that. I m gonna `die and this second the crocodile came in the water and the lion and the crocodile Fight over me and then the lion still got me and then  my papa call all the big buffalo and i am never happy because my Papa and my mama didn't give up at me.

Battle at Kruger National Park Sequence.

W.A.L.T recall events in order.

	The herd of buffalo are walking along the river bank.
	A pride of  lions are resting in the sun.
	The lions see the buffalo and crouch to hide.
	The lions start chasing the buffalo.
	The lions get baby buffalo in the river bank and a crocodile tries to steal it.
	The Group of buffalo  surrounded the lions.
	Father buffalo is tries to get baby buffalo.
	The baby Buffalo is rescued by the herd of buffalo.