This is my learning goals

This is my  learning goals from the start of the year to show my dad. I hope you like it.

     W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

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My Worst day ever

It was a sunny day in the African Savannah.  I'm very excited! In my herd, my papa and my mama are the biggest buffalo ever and  me I’m just a calf. But one day I’m  gonna be the biggest buffalo ever.  We like to go in the river bank because the river bank  is nice and cold.

Suddenly my dad shouted “Run!” I felt really scared, because I can see and smell the lions behind me. Then they got me and I thought that I was going to die and the lion grabbed me near the water. Next a crocodile came out of the water and grabbed my tail. The lion and the crocodile began to fight over me.

Then the lions won the fight and dragged me out of the water. The lion still had me, but then my papa called all the big buffalo to come and fight the lions. My papa was very angry and he rammed the lions. Then the lion ran and hid.  

I’ve never been this happy before, because my papa and my mama didn't give up at me. I am back to the herd and I am very happy because I am a live  

W.A.L.T read information about animals and find the key facts.