My first draft

My first draft

During the school holidays we went to the Hanmer Springs. Dad, Mum, me and my little brother love going to Hanmer Springs. We planned to go swimming four times and stay there for two days.We went up to Hanmer Springs on Thursday because the weather was warm.

On Thursday we packed our car with all our clothes and we went to  Pak n Save and bought some food. We bought chips, crackers, eggs, hot dogs, corned beef, soap and shampoo.

Then we were ready to drive to Hanmer. It was a long drive going to Hanmer Springs. When we were driving  we could see clean rivers. When we were driving me and my little brother were videoing because we like videoing when we are going to some thing. We drove straight to Hanmer Springs.

We stayed in the camping ground  for two days. The room we bought was so so small, we had 4 beds. Inside the room we had a small kitchen and small playground it was really cold in there the rain was not stopping. We do BBQ it was fun cooking the BBQ and wan we finish. when we ready to eat the BBQ.then we eat the BBQ outside the room it was really cold outside 

The next day we try to go to the waterfall because it is a long way from here but we heard a sound we thought that was a waterfall but it was just a river. Then next we went back in  the room  and got our clothes and went to the hot pool.

Next we finished getting our clothes and togs and we were ready to go to the hot pool. We  went to the hot pools and stayed there for 5 hours and Me and my little brother went to the slide and there were three slides. There was a black slide and a white one and another slide.

I had a good time with my family in the Hanmer Springs and it was fun. Going to the hot pool and doing the BBQ and staying in Camping ground and we went to the  waterfalls and I hope we will go to the Hanmer Springs In the next holidays.

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