Social Studies 2020 - Cellphone use

Are students addicted to their cellphones? If so, is that a problem?
Yes

Key Idea -
The negative impact on students

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Students are addicted to cell phones
Information
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Why they use it
Time Spent
Social Media


Delufiy
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Teenagers are addicted to cell phones. This matters because nowadays teenagers can't imagine a day without cell phones. This also matters because this is their only entertainment system at this point, they don't use TVs or read, etc. Students are addicted to cell phones because of social media, they use social media to communicate with the people around them. It’s an easier solution than talking in person with someone and you can meet more people easier than meeting them in person. This affects them negatively because they can be judged heavily for the things they post and they can also be cyberbullied by the people around them. They also use cell phones for normal uses, such as reading, as a calculator, and a searching device. This can impact teenagers negatively as they can use them for too long and it can affect them personally. Teenagers spend quite a lot of time on cell phones as they can’t think of something better to do. They also spend a lot of time on cell phones because of the people around them. This can affect them negatively because they can lose focus easier and can also affect their eyesight. These are only some reasons why teenagers are addicted to cell phones. Cell phones are useful, but nowadays teenagers are using them for useless purposes.