English

begin with a preposition 

preposition a word that indicted and  location or movements 

a. At

b. in 

C,from

D.on

E.about

F.by

examples 

after school, i went straight home

at 4:30, i had netball training.

red, white, and blue

use the red white, and blue sentence style when you have several ideas to convy about a topic '

examples 

While playing netball there is some main rules to follow they are no stepping, three second's with the ball and three feet away while deafening another player. 

interdiction 

Q stands for quote - a quote from a tect or should link in your story 

R stands for rhetorical  questions  - a questions you don't have to answer    

TAKO

 T. Tiles  ( the merchant of venue)
A. Author  ( walliem Shakespeare)
K. Key arguments used word from the question so what are you arguing
a key moment taht shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to pay. a pound of his flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond 

O. outline. the three things you are going to write about. (red white blue) -
 red. he was wiling to die for money to give Bassanio
white. Shylock and Antonio hate each other
blue. Shylock doesn't show mercy
outline
"if you wrang us, shall not revenge?".  ( Shakespeare Shylock) have
you ever felt like taking revenge? in  William Shakespeare's
"the merchant of venue" a key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to forfeit to pound of flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond. this moment was shocking. out outrageous and fascinating. this moment was important to the text as a whole because Shylock and Antonio didn't like each other but still agreed on the bond antonio was willing to risk his life for Bassanio , and Shylock did not show in chaining his bond

Basic body paragraph X3

(PEEL)

P. point - The moment when Antonio agreed to the bond was shocking because Shylock and Antonio didn't get along.
E. evidence - Antonio was a Merchant  and Shylock made a living lending people money with interest. while Shylock charged interest, Antonio lent money without interest and scorned Shylock for doing so . he also spat at Shylock and called him " cut-throat dog"
E. explain (how the evidence prove the point) - therefore, the reader is shocked to discover Antonio and Skylock can come to an agreement about money lending. it is also shocking because when Shylock called Antonio out for the way he treats him, Antonio tells Shylock that he will spit on him and call him a dog again. this treatment is not used between people who made make agreements.

L. link ( link back to my key argument) - with treatment like this from Antonio towards Skylock, and a promise to be just as cruel in the futurem it is shocking that they both agreed to the bond. `

Mirror conclusion - TAKOL

 T. Tiles  ( the merchant of venue)
A. Author  ( William Shakespeare)
K. Key arguments used word from the question so what are you arguing
a key moment taht shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to pay. a pound of his flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond 

O. outline. the three things you are going to write about. (red white blue) -
 red. he was wiling to die for money to give Bassanio
white. Shylock and Antonio hate each other
blue. Shylock doesn't show mercy
outline

In William Shakespeare 'The Merchant of Venice' a key moment  that shocked the reader was when Antonio agreed to bond of pound of flesh if he couldn't pay back Shylock. so this was shocking because Antonio hated Shylock and promised to mistreat him in the future. Antonio was willing ti die for Bassanio even thought he begged him not to take the risk. finally, because Shylock had never shown meray and di not at the trial. for these reasons it is clear that it is moment was shocking to the reader